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Saturday, April 18, 2015

WeWriWa 4/19/15 - A Heart on Hold

Welcome to this Sunday's snippet, the very first eight sentences from my Civil War romance and debut novel, A Heart on Hold.  These are the words that turned me from a writer into an author. 



The thought of war was removed from Charlotte’s mind as she uncurled her legs from beneath her patched cotton dress and stretched them into the brook. She tilted her head back and closed her eyes as the icy water swirled over her bare feet. It felt good to have finally loosened the tight braid from her hair. She swayed back and forth, letting the wavy locks tickle her shoulders. Achilles, who had been grazing contentedly, whinnied at the light bugs that flickered about his muzzle. 

Charlotte’s fingers found the soft jade and eggshell tassels that ringed her picnic blanket and her mind began to wander. 

“It is coming you know,” a voice from behind her stated matter-of-factly. “None of us will be able to hide much longer.”

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Come back next week to meet the owner of the mysterious voice and fall in love with the Scarlet and Rhett of Arkansas!

14 comments:

  1. Well, it's no wonder you're an author. Words like these are proof it was meant to be. Fantastic description! You're a natural! :)

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    1. Thank you Evelyn! This is my favorite story that I've written to date :-)

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  2. Excellent writing, beautiful imagery - loved it!

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  3. Congratulations on the debut! Very good imagery, I felt I was right there with her. I'm curious to see who was talking to her. Can't wait for more. Great 8!

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    1. Thanks Christina! I'm glad you enjoyed!!

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  4. Beautiful description, can't wait to learn who has come to talk with her. Great snippet!

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    1. Thank you, Veronica! This is my debut and favorite work to date . . . I hope you love it!

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  5. Great imagery! I love historicals and this looks to be a wonderful one.

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    1. Thank you Denisea! I can't wait to share it with you!!

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  6. Nice description, with plenty of sensory images and the hint of problems to come.

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    1. Thank you Ed! I hope you pop back by next week!

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