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Sunday, May 3, 2015

WeWriWa - 5/3/15 - A Heart on Hold

Welcome back to this week's eight sentences from my debut novel, A Heart on Hold. And guess what? All FOUR books are going to be available in one convenient set coming May 7th from 5 Prince Publishing! Watch for details on my author page!

 As he joined her on the blanket, she noticed that mischievous twinkle in his hazel eyes that she’d grown to love. His eyes looked more green than brown this evening, shining beautifully against the backdrop of his ruggedly handsome face. A sudden warmth flooded her veins, giving her a slight shiver. Resisting the urge to scoot closer to him, Charlotte drew in a shaky breath. “Reading helped pass the time while you were, well, gone.” Well, that sounded dumb. “You’ve always been good at it -- truth to right, I was always a bit jealous, what with you being the top reader in the class.” Charlotte felt heat creep into her cheeks since she had never taken compliments very well, and those coming from the perfect, full lips of Sanderson Redding made her especially self-conscious. 

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9 comments:

  1. I liked her reaction to the compliments! Interesting snippet...

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    1. Thanks Veronica! Charlotte doesn't take compliments very well :-)

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    2. Thanks Veronica! Charlotte doesn't take compliments very well :-)

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  2. Some nice stuff here... the way his eye color drifts (a trait I love about hazel eyes but so rarely gets press). I also like her embarrassment. Very real.

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    1. Thank you Eden! I love hazel eyes too! I'm glad you enjoyed the scene!

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    2. Thank you Eden! I love hazel eyes too! I'm glad you enjoyed the scene!

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  3. Nice mood setting. Reading is so good for passing time - if only we had time to pass! Well done.

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    1. Thank you, Zoe! If only we had the time <3 :-)

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    2. Thank you, Zoe! If only we had the time <3 :-)

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